If I were to pick at that nit, I would suggest "mistrust somewhere in the chain of transactions"
Thanks, John
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John,
This list provides some valuable insight.
The only thing I would change is the Item 3: Minimal Trust. My correction is nitpicky, but I would change "mistrust between entities: to "mistrust among entities." Often the two parties transacting trust each other. The trust breakdown is further up or down the transaction chain. "Among" captures this more accurately than "between."
Jeff
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