[KI-LC] Re: Fwd: FOR REVIEW: updated paper

I'm sorry Sal - but I have a very hard time understanding what the document tries to describe or what the ask is. If it is to inform the ISO committee of work going on outside of ISO, then it does a confusing and poor job. There are a whole bunch of claims that "the scheme" or "the TPI" or some other things actively "do" things - no mention of WHO or WHAT takes action - it's all super-vague and seems to paint a wishful-thinking world. In it's current state I do not support sending this document outside of Kantara. ———————— *Andrew Hughes *CISM m +1 250.888.9474 AndrewHughes3000@gmail.com On Fri, Apr 5, 2024 at 7:01 AM Salvatore D'Agostino wrote:

Cleaned up further

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FYI - the polished version,

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*From: *Tara Sinclair *Subject: **FOR REVIEW: updated paper* *Date: *5 April 2024 at 13:15:29 BST *To: *Mark Lizar , MarkL

Incorporating your latest changes

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