Thanks Andrew. I will work with this feedback. I am also flying tomorrow so will see what I can do from the road an coordinate with Mark. From: Andrew Hughes <andrewhughes3000@gmail.com> Sent: Saturday, April 6, 2024 3:56 PM To: Salvatore D'Agostino <sal@idmachines.com> Cc: Kantara Leadership Council <lc@kantarainitiative.org>; Peter Davis <peter.davis@airsidemobile.com>; Karyn Bright <karyn@kantarainitiative.org> Subject: Re: [KI-LC] Fwd: FOR REVIEW: updated paper I'm sorry Sal - but I have a very hard time understanding what the document tries to describe or what the ask is. If it is to inform the ISO committee of work going on outside of ISO, then it does a confusing and poor job. There are a whole bunch of claims that "the scheme" or "the TPI" or some other things actively "do" things - no mention of WHO or WHAT takes action - it's all super-vague and seems to paint a wishful-thinking world. In it's current state I do not support sending this document outside of Kantara. ———————— Andrew Hughes CISM m +1 250.888.9474 <mailto:AndrewHughes3000@gmail.com> AndrewHughes3000@gmail.com On Fri, Apr 5, 2024 at 7:01 AM Salvatore D'Agostino <sal@idmachines.com <mailto:sal@idmachines.com> > wrote: Cleaned up further Get Outlook for iOS <https://aka.ms/o0ukef> _____ From: MarkL <mark@0pn.org <mailto:mark@0pn.org> > Sent: Friday, April 5, 2024 9:58:18 AM To: Tim Loyd <timl@transparencylab.ca <mailto:timl@transparencylab.ca> > Cc: timothy Reiniger <tsreiniger@gmail.com <mailto:tsreiniger@gmail.com> >; Sharon Polsky <Sharon.polsky@aminacorp.ca <mailto:Sharon.polsky@aminacorp.ca> >; Kate Tilleczek <katetill@edu.yorku.ca <mailto:katetill@edu.yorku.ca> >; Paul Knowles <paul.knowles@meddea.global <mailto:paul.knowles@meddea.global> >; Salvatore D'Agostino <sal@idmachines.com <mailto:sal@idmachines.com> > Subject: Fwd: FOR REVIEW: updated paper FYI - the polished version, Begin forwarded message: From: Tara Sinclair <tara.sinclair@reddialcomms.co.uk <mailto:tara.sinclair@reddialcomms.co.uk> > Subject: FOR REVIEW: updated paper Date: 5 April 2024 at 13:15:29 BST To: Mark Lizar <mark@transparencylab.ca <mailto:mark@transparencylab.ca> >, MarkL <mark@0pn.org <mailto:mark@0pn.org> > Incorporating your latest changes _______________________________________________ A Community Group mailing list of KantaraInitiative.org LC mailing list -- lc@kantarainitiative.org <mailto:lc@kantarainitiative.org> To unsubscribe send an email to staff@kantarainitiative.org <mailto:staff@kantarainitiative.org> List archives -- https://mailman.kantarainitiative.org/hyperkitty/list/lc@kantarainitiative.o... ______ Group wiki -- https://kantara.atlassian.net/wiki/spaces/LC