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From: MarkL <mark@0pn.org>
Sent: Friday, April 5, 2024 9:58:18 AM
To: Tim Loyd <timl@transparencylab.ca>
Cc: timothy Reiniger <tsreiniger@gmail.com>; Sharon Polsky <Sharon.polsky@aminacorp.ca>; Kate Tilleczek <katetill@edu.yorku.ca>; Paul Knowles <paul.knowles@meddea.global>; Salvatore D'Agostino <sal@idmachines.com>
Subject: Fwd: FOR REVIEW: updated paper
 

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From: Tara Sinclair <tara.sinclair@reddialcomms.co.uk>
Subject: FOR REVIEW: updated paper
Date: 5 April 2024 at 13:15:29 BST
To: Mark Lizar <mark@transparencylab.ca>, MarkL <mark@0pn.org>

Incorporating your latest changes