This includes all of the feedback from Andrew Alec and Noreen as best as I could understand. I have included the document as well as a link to it on google docs

Either can be used for feedback, but the google doc will be used on Tuesday to edit.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JO3HQHSiPFHC-JNVKzW0bdiYlV9WlTp7/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=109794657323597753486&rtpof=true&sd=true

..tom